Our aim this week is to try and connect with our reader when we are writing and to try and get a connection or reponse from them through our descriptions. Read some of these fabulous pieces of writing about our most hated or loved food. Tell us how they make you react...
I don't like peas. They're gross. They're horrible. They're just yuck.
Usually I play with them. I squeeze them so hard their guts go flying out. Well... it's not really their guts but it tatses like it. Once it hit my cousin in the face. We just laughed. I also think that they look like snot balls or beetle tummies or just plain mush. Peas are absolutely disgusting.
By Texas
I love it. Just simply, love it how my mum towers the cheese on top of my spaghetti bolonaise. It gurgles down my throat when I swallow it. I shovel it into my mouth all the time. My mum always tells me to make sure my plate is clean. After 5 minutes it is all gone. My mum says "Stop slurping that down your throat!"
My family are pigs!
By Ashlee
Besketty bobanase (Spaghetti Bolognaise) is the best taste with cheese mountains on top then it melts into the meat as I slurp the pasta into my mouth. Besketty, besketty I love that besketty taste. Do you too?
By Georgia
Tomatoes, yuck!
I never ever ever ever eat tomatoes. Tomatoes are horrible, discusting, poisonous red balls. I will never eat tomatoes. Do not give me tomatoes because I always throw the tomatoes out the window.
By John
8 comments:
I hate peas as well.
I like the way the spaghetti bolognese pasta slurps and flicks as I suck it into my mouth.
I love the writing guys
(and girls)
Megan
Very very cool stories room 15. I love looking at your blog. Miss Ryan has done an awesmone job of putting this together for you.
Whaea Tracey
Hi really enjoyed reading your thoughts on food. Well done room 15
Hello Room 15
Great thoughts on food. I enjoyed reading them. I remember when I was a child, my Mother MADE me eat swedes and I hated them. I have cooked them as an adult but I mashed them with butter, pepper and salt and I ate two tablespoons. And guess what? They weren't as horrible as I thought they would be.
From Mrs Hopkins
I am left absolutely speechless!
I had no idea that you hated tomatoes when you are so fond of
tomato sauce!
John's Gran
To Texas, your a funny writer. We enjoyed the oart about the guts flying out of the peas...well done!
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