My Triathlon and Duathlon
On Tuesday it was Team Tauhara’s triathlon.
First we swam. Bang went the wood, we were off. I tried to zoom but someone grabbed my leg and pulled.
Soon I got out of the pool.
I zoomed to my bike and I puffed a lot.
It was pretty hard because I went the wrong way. I skidded and kept going. Soon I zoomed to the end of the bike. I jumped off my bike and started running. I ran to the finish, my friend tied me.
I said my house colour.
We got a chocolate bar.
I got my towel and went shivering back to class.
It was the best day.
By Tyler
On Tuesday it was Team Tauhara’s triathlon.
First we swam. Bang went the wood, we were off. I tried to zoom but someone grabbed my leg and pulled.
Soon I got out of the pool.
I zoomed to my bike and I puffed a lot.
It was pretty hard because I went the wrong way. I skidded and kept going. Soon I zoomed to the end of the bike. I jumped off my bike and started running. I ran to the finish, my friend tied me.
I said my house colour.
We got a chocolate bar.
I got my towel and went shivering back to class.
It was the best day.
By Tyler
3 comments:
Well done Tyler. I'm glad that you enjoyed your school triathlon - it really helped you to get ready for the Ironkidz last weekend.
Fantastic recount Tyler. I loved your 'WOW' words - zoomed, puffed, skidded. Remember to try and use those connectives, but, because, as, so, and then... to lengthen your sentences. Keep up the fabulous work!
Love from Mrs Wills
I like your story.
I enjoyed swiming when I did my triathlon.
By Nina
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