Personal Writing

Our aim this week is to try and connect with our reader when we are writing and to try and get a connection or reponse from them through our descriptions. Read some of these fabulous pieces of writing about our most hated or loved food. Tell us how they make you react...

I don't like peas. They're gross. They're horrible. They're just yuck.
Usually I play with them. I squeeze them so hard their guts go flying out. Well... it's not really their guts but it tatses like it. Once it hit my cousin in the face. We just laughed. I also think that they look like snot balls or beetle tummies or just plain mush. Peas are absolutely disgusting.

By Texas

I love it. Just simply, love it how my mum towers the cheese on top of my spaghetti bolonaise. It gurgles down my throat when I swallow it. I shovel it into my mouth all the time. My mum always tells me to make sure my plate is clean. After 5 minutes it is all gone. My mum says "Stop slurping that down your throat!"
My family are pigs!

By Ashlee


Besketty bobanase (Spaghetti Bolognaise) is the best taste with cheese mountains on top then it melts into the meat as I slurp the pasta into my mouth. Besketty, besketty I love that besketty taste. Do you too?

By Georgia

Tomatoes, yuck!

I never ever ever ever eat tomatoes. Tomatoes are horrible, discusting, poisonous red balls. I will never eat tomatoes. Do not give me tomatoes because I always throw the tomatoes out the window.

By John

Tiffany Matthew's Art

For the past week, Room 15 have been exploring the work of Tiffany Matthews. We love her art and tried to do a few of her pieces ourselves. Here is a sneak preview of some of our work. Miss Ryan will post the rest of our work in the holidays.

Singing With Room 16

Science

Last Friday Rhys brought in a bottle of diet coke and a packet of mentos for his science experiment. Watch this video to see what happens!

Do you know how this happens?

Adam's explanation

How the speedy greedy works
We invented speedy greedy to help kids get to school faster.
There are boosters on the side of each shoe .To start the boosters you press the button on the side of the booster.
There are wheels that come out of the bottom of the shoes .To make the wheels come out press the button on the boosters.
There’s a break on the outside heel on each shoe. There’s a wire coming out connected to the break it’s got a grabber on it.
It makes walking safer and fun.mostley for teen ages or over.easy to start.
By Adam

Megan's shoe explanation

How the coolest shoes work

We have invented heaps of the coolest shoes to make walking to school more fun, safe and easier.

I’ve added a MP3 to make walking to school more fun. There is one MP3 on each shoe in the lace. When you tie up your laces the MP3 will turns on, but when you untie your lace theMP3 turns off.

I’ve also added a booster so we can be much faster on the way. The booster is on the heal of the shoe and when you touch the booster frame the booster turns on/off.

The coolest shoes help everyone be faster and funnier for everyone!

By Megan Elise Lockett